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The charts illustrate the percentages of computer ownership by the overall population for eight years between 2002 to 2010 and the education level in 2000 and 2010. Overall, the population of computer ownership rose from 2002 to 2010. People at the highest level of education were the most population of computer ownership. Reversely, people below the high school level of education were the least population of computer ownership.
People that have a computer in 2002 are below 60 % of the population. After that, the trend increased slowly until 2010. Between 2004 to 2010 or for six years, the trend of computer ownership population only went up around 20%.
In 2010, the percentage of computer ownership population of the people who have a non-high school diploma increased more than two times since 2002. The same trend has occurred to people that have high school graduates and college incompleted. They revealed a similar increase. Post-graduate and bachelor's degrees are the lowest increasing over the period.
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Some people do not apply "Do not judge a book by its cover" idiom in this century in their social life. Then, people judge a person based on his/her social status and material possessions rather than his/her honour, kindness, and trust. I will say that I totally disagree with that issue because wealth and social status can not be an assessment to look at people's personalities. This essay will discuss more detail about this issue and I will give a suggestion about how to examine a person's worth.
As I said in the first paragraph, nowadays people only judge a person based on social status and material possessions. For instance, people look at a rich man as an angle. He has much money, wearing a luxury tuxedo, and driving a nice car then people judge that he should be a good man and well-educated. However, probably he got all of his wealth from corruption or selling drugs, who knows?. Not all rich people that have a higher social status in society have a good personality such as honour, kind, and can be trusted. Another thing, however, poor people that have a lower social status seems to be judged as a bad person because they have to do anything to obtain a meal for their family. Perhaps, such people are very hard working that other people in this world.
Moreover, I would like to give my opinion about this thing. I do not support that issue at all because I think that we can not see anything inside of the people. We should know about them deeply and personally, then we can assess what this kind of person and how his/her personalities beside of what the social status they are or how much money are they have.
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